Slide show has great music that helps set the mood for the message you are about to share with the viewer.
Since I've been following your blog, I know where you stand on this issue. But your video has a high level of sarcasism at the start and I'm not sure a first time visitor would really understand the message you're trying to get across.
Timing of slide show transitions are effective. Pictures can be easily seen as well as text read on text slides.
Pictures you chose really add meaning to the message you are relating. Each seems important and helps to clarify your slide show’s theme. Nice inclusion of cartoons -- nobody else has done this. Make sure, however, that you are not breeching copyright laws with these cartoons.
Slide show is a great length, but your overall message gets muddled about half way thru. Use more succinct statements about the value of using real speech rather than digital text. What are the real benefits? Be very specific in your words.
You run out of music at the end -- tweak the presentation so that this doesn't happen.
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Slide show has great music that helps set the mood for the message you are about to share with the viewer.
Since I've been following your blog, I know where you stand on this issue. But your video has a high level of sarcasism at the start and I'm not sure a first time visitor would really understand the message you're trying to get across.
Timing of slide show transitions are effective. Pictures can be easily seen as well as text read on text slides.
Pictures you chose really add meaning to the message you are relating. Each seems important and helps to clarify your slide show’s theme. Nice inclusion of cartoons -- nobody else has done this. Make sure, however, that you are not breeching copyright laws with these cartoons.
Slide show is a great length, but your overall message gets muddled about half way thru. Use more succinct statements about the value of using real speech rather than digital text. What are the real benefits? Be very specific in your words.
You run out of music at the end -- tweak the presentation so that this doesn't happen.
wow , jblack such a wonderful criticism . I guess you are a video editor right?
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